Good art, but...
I don't really see the point of this. There's no story or interactivity other than changing the images... Have I missed something?
Good art, but...
I don't really see the point of this. There's no story or interactivity other than changing the images... Have I missed something?
Sound is an issue
The animation was pretty good, and the sound effects fitted well, but it's a shame they were so low quality, kind of let the thing down, definitely made me want to quit watching it. Not that I did, still, hurt ya ears, ya know?
Anywho, pretty nice, keep up the good work :D
how do i make the sounds high quality?
Cool
Ive got some stuff you could do to make it better, In the water travel make the water animation better and for the one where hes falling through the air put in a background. Otherwise the animations OK, try something different next time though.
thanks
Woah...
This is great. The drawings are at times simple but the movie is still very professonal, the voice acting fits the characters and is high quality and the actual animation is very smooth. Also the idea for the flash is very original. infact this is an amazing flash! Great work, looking forward to the full Hamster Jam!
good try
I can see you put alot of time and effort into this and tryed to make it the best you can. Tip one: add some sfx you can get them from alot of different sites e.g sound snap or flash kit.
Tip two: try to improve your drawing and use symbols.
Tip three: use some basic action scripting it can be very usefull.
Tip four: look at the tutorial collection in newgrounds it is VERY usefull
Thanks for the tip, i am a coder already :p
Granted i am not very good at coding but i am still trying my drawing skills.
Thanks for the tips and the reviews.
Positive, then tips!
I'm a animation student. So far I've made a few animations, one of which won best use of sound in Animation 09, a competition run by Manchester university and MOSI. I always appreciate feedback so that I can improve my flash and make them better!
Age 29, Male
Student
United Kingdom
Joined on 5/12/08