Kurai-Samurai's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Promotion]

Sound is an issue

The animation was pretty good, and the sound effects fitted well, but it's a shame they were so low quality, kind of let the thing down, definitely made me want to quit watching it. Not that I did, still, hurt ya ears, ya know?

Anywho, pretty nice, keep up the good work :D

Hobozarus responds:

how do i make the sounds high quality?

[Things- Around the World]

kewl :D

I think the art is great, but truthfully I think the animation isn't very in sync with the music at the start and towards the end I think there is too much going on on the screen. Also it seems to have no narrative and/or message, but then again it is a music video. So I think you could be a great animator, only practice some more and spend more time on your animation, to be a good animator you have to be patient. Spend around a few weeks to a month or two making, planning and sripting you next animation and try to give it a story :D Anyway good luck, look forward to seeing more of your stuff!

mmautrey responds:

thanks, i shall!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Chocolate Rain loop]

Awesome :D

I think its really good only one thing. Its quite short, seeing how good this is I recommend that you play around with flash a bit more then try something longer :D

Maxatross responds:

i sure will, i could extend this or make a whole new one im tryin to decide now, what do you think?

[Mozz Travels 3]

Cool

Ive got some stuff you could do to make it better, In the water travel make the water animation better and for the one where hes falling through the air put in a background. Otherwise the animations OK, try something different next time though.

Orangebeef responds:

thanks

[FBF: Essence of Flash 2]

good try

I can see you put alot of time and effort into this and tryed to make it the best you can. Tip one: add some sfx you can get them from alot of different sites e.g sound snap or flash kit.
Tip two: try to improve your drawing and use symbols.
Tip three: use some basic action scripting it can be very usefull.
Tip four: look at the tutorial collection in newgrounds it is VERY usefull

xedon responds:

Thanks for the tip, i am a coder already :p
Granted i am not very good at coding but i am still trying my drawing skills.
Thanks for the tips and the reviews.

Positive, then tips!